That was certainly, uh, interesting
The humor was kinda, uh, off. I've seen worse graphics on here by far, but I've seen much better as well. Having seen your photoshop work, I know you can have a great eye for detail, and you've got a pretty good sense of humor too. I think you should take some time this summer and put together a polished cartoon. It could be about some guy who's obsessed with duck tape. It could happen {:~D
Don't be discouraged by others. You've got potential as a cartoonist!