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electric-pig

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This is my online portfolio. It is meant to showcase my artwork but also to be alot of fun for users of any age group. If you are younger well there is not anything too crazy. if you are older well, it is just plain fun and will hopefully bring the kid out in you. Please enjoy!

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I Like It

Pretty good. It is of course a very large project so there are a few mistakes in there.

First off, on the first page of the bio it explains things that are on the intro page, that can be confusing. Also you downsize yourself a lot in the bio, for a portfolio that is a big no-no; even if you don't think a whole lot of yourself your portfolio shouldn't reflect that.

Also your navigator could use some kind of sound (like you said maybe a pig squeal or maybe some electric sound effects). Some kind of "elevator" music would be good to, something that could set the mood for the reader.

Throughout I noticed some grammatical mistakes which a few peer reviews should fix right up. Other than that though this is a well done art portfolio. Good luck in your future doings and keep up the good work!

desibu responds:

thanks for the critique. i like the elevator music idea.