Art
You did your best and came up with a simple story. I'm very impressed. Great job !
EDIT: Thank you Newgrounds for deeming me worthy of a trophy! I love all of you so much!
Before I go on, I would like to thank Tom for allowing me to submit this oversized file! You rock, man!
I also want to thank everyone here at Newgrounds who has shown their undying support for me. I appreciate all of you so much. You all are my cause for living! Thank you!
This movie is a collaboration I have done with several other Newgrounds artists. You can read up about them and about the story and everything on the movie website:
http://www.althirius-studios.com/loane
I didn't make this movie in Flash, if you're wondering why there's no menu or anything. Also, the program did not allow for much compression so that's why the file size isn't so tiny. I know there are a few mistakes with movements and everything. I hope to correct all of these and resubmit the file later, but in the meantime, I hope that you will all enjoy my unique one of a kind sketchy style. :)
Cheers, everyone!
~Stephanie
Art
You did your best and came up with a simple story. I'm very impressed. Great job !
when does part 2 comes
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very interesting
your storyline is actually of real movie quality. the drawing and animating could use a bit of improvement but as you continue working with flash I am sure it will get better. I think you can go really far with this, keep up the good work!
decent
you know i think you have a lot of potential, not the best animation but still somewhat engaging. I hope to see improvement on dialog and art but i think you can do great things in time.
Alright
It was interesting, but it was kind of slow. And the running animation could've been better. But it was pretty good.