You did your best and came up with a simple story. I'm very impressed. Great job !
when does part 2 comes
your storyline is actually of real movie quality. the drawing and animating could use a bit of improvement but as you continue working with flash I am sure it will get better. I think you can go really far with this, keep up the good work!
you know i think you have a lot of potential, not the best animation but still somewhat engaging. I hope to see improvement on dialog and art but i think you can do great things in time.
It was interesting, but it was kind of slow. And the running animation could've been better. But it was pretty good.