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This my first 3D computer animation. It's made in maya, for animation class. I wanted to make a big factory with a evil and dark atmosphere around it. It took a lot of time, but some of that time was fun:)

I like reviews, because I want to improve my animation skills. So don't hesitate, write a review and don't be too kind.

Thanks for watching!



loved the story so 10/10 but -1 star for the molten metal it somehow didn't look right but very nice smooth animation


Kind of ironic, a factory that makes gears. :3 It was interesting to watch, I think you did a good job.


Looks a lot like stop motion. Good stuff.

grabbelfant responds:

Thanks, believe me, I've done some stop motion, but camera movements like this are almost impossible for stop motion. But I think I know what you mean. The mechanical stuff is also something that is done a lot in stopmotion films. Thanks for the review


I am intrigued by the level of detail in your work. The only reason I did not give 10 is I want to see more of your work on NG. I believe you can do even better.

grabbelfant responds:

You'r not the only one who believes that, I'm joining you. Glad you gave me a 9 instead of a 10. I like 9s better. 10 means that you couldn't improve, and that would be a shame for a schoolproject. I always want to improve. Happily I know some other reasons why you shouldn't give me a 10. Reasons in what way I could make my animation better. Thanks for the review. You will see more from me on NG. So that NG will be a little more creative and a little less dickfucking marioclocksprites.


very nice its like a cross in between an early video game like quake 2 and an classic XBOX game

grabbelfant responds:

It's not something i had in mind, but I think you're right. Probably because I tried to make it as simple as possible so that my crapy PC could render it in time. Thanks for the review

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3.64 / 5.00

Jun 17, 2009
7:42 AM EDT