I'd encourage you to progress in your skills with animation. The flash was a little lacking,(I got the plot and chuckled a little.) it REALLY shoulda had music. The voice-overs would be uneccesary in this piece with just the right bg music. But, yeah. Practice, practice, PRACTICE. It'll be a treat to see your most epic work.
It could've used some audio, though. Perhaps the final battle theme?
It does nothing
why have you posted this "video". I clicked on play and a guy jumps out with a little text bubble. It's such a waste.
Read the Author Comments asshole
not funny at all
all it need is sound and it make a good flash