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this is the same as the last one that got a good review but this one has better credits and fixedmusic i hope itll get even better reviews than lasttime ENJOY



I did not enjoy that in the slightest. Not funny, bad animation, bad storyline, TERRIBLE voice acting...try harder.

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Why's the leader of Nintendo Scottish?

Nintendo is a Japanese product, could've atleast tried a Japanese accent

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marcodawson responds:

it wasnt the leader kinda a evilishly stupid guy hacking it hes my dad

There's some hope in this flash...

As a first animation, this wasn't a bad attempt. The animation was okay, but what you need to make sure that you take a lot of attention to details. I can see that in some cases the crappy drawing was the look you were going for, and in some cases, it did work. In others, I would have preferred to see some good drawing. I can see that you do have some drawing skill, and in any future animations you plan on doing, I'd like to see you show that off.

The fact that you did your own voices other than using voice generators like most lazy people is good. Your syncronising with the animation was a little unrefined, but it is good to see people try and do their best with that. It's how you improve. The more you try, the better you get. Best example of this is Egoraptor. If you look at his animation at the beginning of his Newgrounds life through to his present animations, you can see how his animation has evolved since then.

The best advice I can give you is make more animation, and develop your animating skills. I look forward to seeing any future animations you plan on making. I give you a five because I can see true effort and enthusiasm on your work. Good luck.

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marcodawson responds:

thanks im getting a bamboo pad

The first voice was excessively annoying.

Try to add some more substance to the flash, and maybe a less annoying voice. Otherwise, the animation was ok, and at least it wasn't Microsoft Sam reporting for duty.

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2.18 / 5.00

Jun 13, 2009
4:43 AM EDT
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