Well...
Your animation needs some work. There wasn't really much to it either, just a bit of text and jumping on goombas. Overall it could have been better if you put more time into it. Good luck on your future flashes.
Author Comments
This took awhile to make and I was told about a "V-Cam" that helps you scroll forwards or backwards.The moving camera might be a little weird. You can tell me ways to improve on my camera movement or animation.
Choppy
To be honest, the animation was pretty rough. I didn't find your texts to be very humorous. And, well, not much else. Good animation takes time, so I'm not going to criticise you completely. It's not something that I would really blam. You know what I'm saying?
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- Jun 11, 2009
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