dude...
for a first time it was cool. after a quick buffing up here and there you'll be doing fine
Author Comments
Hey, all. This is MrAmature, and this my first submitted Flash movie.
To those who read the descpritions first:
This is the very first Flash movie I made in what seems to be 2-3 years old. It was made on Flash Professional 8, and I edited a couple of bits that needed editing. I have Flash CS4 Professional now, and it's gonna be a bit of time before I get accustomed to it.
A couple things to note; the audio is a little choppy and loud and the "credits" go by a little too fast, sorry about that.
Anyway, hope you enjoy this movie.
good movie but,notmuchofa story.
it's good, but too short needs some work don't give up man,
you still did good.keep tryingnoone's perfect.
infact perfect is oly amatter of opinion
It just needs work don't feel bad
Nothing Awesome, not bad for first try.
Basically, all that I can say is that you need to have more than 2-3 things happening at the same time, it will improve the overall experience a lot more.
Add in a loading bar, and please try to refrain from using sprites.
( Sprites are a way of the past... ) I also noticed that your sprites still have white around their edges, please remove that at the very least before EVER sending in a submission.
- ZoMbiESsSZ -
Good
Good Job
and Good for a first try
Keep it up!
Good, but future projects need work.
You need to blend the sprites in with the backround, by removing the white that was visible for the entire movie. I gave you a 5, as I can tell you put work into this flash. Keep it up man, some original ideas. It did make me laugh though =D