good animation and vivid colors gives this all my 5!!
I like the idea and the style of this animation. Yeah, just change the your to "you're" like everybody said, also a bit of colour would be cool, Like colour the background or make the newgrounds store part stand out more. I still like the pencil-like style of the animation too. My favourite part is when it shows the tankman with the NG T-shirt on.
As for that review by "Deomas". I don't think he read Tom's post, I think the "our" should be kept there.
thanks for reviewing, I'm definitely fixing it up now, It should be updated in a couple of days......
Not too bad!
I like it! Only thing I would suggest, is changing the "Your" to "You're", other than that, looks damn good!
Yeah sorry about that, I hadn't noticed it. thanks for commenting
The idea is cute, and the graphics are appealing. I still have two suggestions:
1. It's misleading that you talk about "our" advertisement. The ads come from other sides and are only shown here. If you're intended to ad it on other pages, e.g., you own homepage, noone would understand that you talk about newgrounds.
2. I don't understand how the NG-store helps to block ads. i think the store rather supports NG and therefore the quality of the games.
Yeah, I should probably get rid of "our", and I will, I have no idea what the second comment is about, the idea is to get adblockers to visit NG store..........
thanks for the comment
The animation on the guys is rather fluent, and I like that. But it certainly lacks colours.
Yeah I got lazy, I'll add some color now, Thanks for the comment.