good for a third
It was good enough I suppose but these have already been done before a million times. You do want to try to fix the frame rate but again for a third flash this was done pretty well. this was short but really this would be a lot better if it was smoother so I suppose try to focus on that.
its pretty good for a third flash, a minimum for a good flash is 1-2 months, remake this one and make it alot longer
I didn't see that coming, and I'm sure mario didn't either. Good job on the blood. It was sorta short, you could have investigated some more ways in which Mario could fail. This one's going on my fav's cause you did the simple deed of making me laugh. CONGRATS. 8/10
Definitely some room for improvement. As you'll probably hear a million more times, it's choppy, and you should make it a little bit longer, as it's a tad short.
The idea is good
I like the idea, but there were 3 things i noticed. One, the framerate was a tad choppy and slow. I'm not sure if that occurred at compilation or something, but it's something to try and fix for the next flash you make. Two, there was a LOT of blood/gore, considering. A bit overboard, in my opinion. The third thing was that it was relatively short. I think it would have been better if it was a tad longer, with more outtakes (or tries, or whatever you want to call them).
Thanks I'll try to do better in my flash animations.