This is my first flash toon, so I I hope you enjoy it. Watch the credits for the aftermath! Also, my apologies on the vocals. I am currently in Thailand, I have a mic worth balls (my XLR's in the States), and I don't have any good voice changing software available to me at the moment.
Lacking
Needs work. Some problems:
1. Short
2. Cliche story that isn't very funny (in my opinion)
3. Poor art style (could put in a little more effort)
4. Voice acting could be better
Sorry for being a little harsh, as it is your first flash. At least it made sense right?
Pretty decent
Joke's a bit odd, and it's a bit short, but still, your new. to it, and pretty good.
amazinglyawesome
lmfao this was AWESOME :L :L :L :L
Nice
For a first flash you did rather well.
LOLOLOLOLOL
SHORT BUT SWEET HAHAHAHA LOLZ. Pretty sweet for a first flash. Is this seriosuly your first flash? It's awesome. I mean, great colors and good audio, but the audio is kind of scratchy.
Thanks. Yeah, it's my first Flash. Sorry about the audio, when I get back to the States I'll have a professional mic on-hand, so no more scratchiness!