For your first flash...

Hey man,

For your first flash that was pretty good.. maybe next try experimenting with some audio in it. But the animation was much better than any peoples first entries... keep working on it.

Worth a laugh or two.

For your first submitted flash, this wasn't too bad. I like how you get a sense of personality within the characters, plus the red man was hilarious. I laughed at nearly every one of his random comments. The animation wasn't that bad either.

The thing the flash is missing is a story. Sure, one man knocks over another man's drink, but that does not make it a plot. Just being more in depth with a storyline will make the viewer want to come back and watch the movie again. Aside from that, it was a decent flash.

You have a good sense of humor, but you need to mesh it with better animation and a story. That should lead you to definate success. Keep up the good work!

Haha

The title of this is so true. Very funny and random.

hahaa

this is funny as hell

yeah

work on that screen