cool
alright i'll keep an eye out for this over the summer, im interested in seeing it. its a nice concept, the story seems a mix between cliche, parody, and seriousness to me, is that an accurate description of what you were going for?
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Hy! I guess this is sorta better than my other flash submissions!
I made this to show you the future series I'm developing. Don't worrie, the series will be better than this flash, this is just an introduction. Here's the story:
A Earth colonie planet, Juvinia, is habited by people and robots, in order to make the planet Earth Style. A malfunction ocurred one day with the leader robot, a colorfull liquid that absorbs matter and controls it (as you might see in the last four robots that appear). Super somebody guy is the robot at the start, dark grey and white with blue glasses. He was 2 robots that became controlled bby the colourfull liquid, and were defeated by random boy, the guy with 2 weird eyes and green hair. he constructs a super strong and inteligent, bent to destroy the colourfull liquid,
Music from 3rd opening from fma!
Alexandre3000 responds:
This is the story, There will be more characters, better quality, Backgrounds, you know, stuff!
Hope you do, I swear It's going to be good, Just chek out between, July and August maybe!
Everyone is rainbow colored.
try hand drawing your characters first. Come up with some good concept arts, chose the best, then proceed. I feel like you just drew these up and went, "OK GOOD TO GO.' plus, too much rainbow gradient.
Alexandre3000 responds:
Actually, I did draw them in paper, and it went pretty well, but I draw it with mouse and, well, those drawnings were at school and couldn't get them, I draw them in the computer, but didn't went so good. I actually changed the gradient to be slightly darker.
i'll explain why i gave it a ten
the music itself i like (big anime fan)
the idea seems to be based around some form of animish style of cartooning.
the drawing is horrible....but given i cant draw a stick figure i dont normally grade on that.
put some work into it and get it all togeather and tell me when its out this summer. i'll drop you a review
Alexandre3000 responds:
Thanks a lot! I'll defenetly put a lot into this, and my drawnings are going to get better, i swear!
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NEEDS MORE WORK..........ENOUGH SAID!!
Alexandre3000 responds:
That's right, it sure does!
Hmm
Assuming you're actually going to follow up on this; I commend you.
The concept sounds alright, but the drawings and animation could use some work.
I'm going to give you a 3, in hopes that you will follow this up. If this wasn't a 'trailer' type thing, I would blam it. You've got a lot of work ahead of you, and good luck.
Alexandre3000 responds:
I draw good by hand, but unfortunatly I only have a mouse, thinking about buying a digitalizer table or what's its name. That's why I'm not going to start the series now, only after I have it, I promise you it WILL be better, thank you for this comment!
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