Not to shabby...
I'm willing to give you an 8 if you keep up the Bandooker Boys part and the near end. The rest of it is crappy. It's as if you made it crappy at the beginning, and then at the end you made it awesome. This is a good thing, but you want to make sure you get your audience (me and others) interested in the beginning of your flash-even if it is just a trailer. Good music picks. What is the last song? Make sure to give credit either on NewGrounds (the application when you add your SWF.File) or integrate it into your movie at the ending like this: Produced by, Music by, Drawn by, etc.
GJ Try to balance your professionalism-it looks good!