Again many of you might find this one to be very cutesy! Well here is another flash i made a while ago. This was my very first flash movie made in my computer graphics class. I decided to put this one up because my other flash got a lot of positive feedback from my second flash ever made, so i'd like to see what people have to say about my veery first flash animation. And again I thank all of you who gave me a lot of positive comments and advice on how to make my flashes better! i'd love to hear more from you all! Thanks Everyone! =D
Feedback
Its not a movie so im not going to review it as one, im going to assume its a proof of concept/feedback for ability.
It is very cute, well drawn with an apt soundtrack. animation could use a bit of smoothing but other than that its very good.
sooooooooo cute
I like it dont listen to all nooby reviews peapole put here (exepect Ehavemerus becasue he voted 10!)
Constructive criticism
When your character walks the is a jerking movement when its legs change direction and the head move up and down for some reason. The butterflies lack any animation. Lastly your dog/fox thing is always moving at the same speed. Lets it stop and look at something or quickly turn its head at something. The rate it moves at is unnatural.
Cute.
The walking animation is rather bad. But it's so cute. =\
Wow...
this is the first flash i have reviewed today that i liked...
Its very cute and well drawn... but unfortunately it loses rating because the animation is abit jurky...
Keep it up though...