This is my first flash. Made it for my web design class in high school.
Do whatever you want to it, I just uploaded it for fun
can you not play? like, ever?
This was actually quite humorous!
Um, with a few voice actors and some more sound effects and soundtracks, this could turn out to be a pretty decent flash!
For your first full flash, how bout a 4/5 ? Usually, "first flashes" are just full of crap. For some reason, it was really funny to me!
sooooo long
...which wouldnt be so bad if it werent so slow paced. thats the only real problem. as a first flash, its not...bad. but, of course, the anim could use improvement. im not knowcking you for that, im knocking you for pace. it was ok, then it bored the hell outta me. decrease the intervals between different parts of conversations, and itd be a LOT easier to watch.