A short I put together. It was mainly for practice so umm yea that's why the story isn't very original... WELL LIVE AND LEARN, M A'RIGHT?
PS: you might notice a change in animation near the end only because I was also trying out some different frame per second stuff (I wanted to see how much smoother it looked). Shouldn't do anything bad just you might notice a difference.
PSS: the song used at the beginning is "4 words- Bullet for my Valentine"
PSSS: I MEANT to spell pepper like peppar. I'm not that bad at spelling haha
*update* just fixed the audio adjustment so you shouldn't have to turn your speakers all the time.
No. I'm sorry but no.
Animation wasn't horribly bad I guess, but it could have been better. I don't care about the animation as much as the plot. There is one, but its been used, used, used, used, and used a million times more. Just think of something creative please.
Oh yea, and viewers don't like having to adjust the volume every 3 seconds because of the deafening music and the whispering voices. (I prefer one in my ears and the other in my head ;) )
haha thanks for the honest review and I will fix the volume issue. when I look back at this there is a lot I would have liked to different. Oh well can't change the past but I will work more on the future
it's alright i guess
Storyline is alright, not particularly funny.
Animation kinda sucks.
Audio is bad quality and voices are bland.
Doesn't even seem like a flash, more like a badly done cartoon.
Nice attempt though.
yea your right. This was really more of a practice animation with shading and lip synching. I actually hate watching this one, but whatever the past is the past now.
Only minor problems w/ volume levels
This was funny, as a person who likes all the elements involved, including hot peppars, so on. But there's one problem, the music was way too high compared to the voices and sound effects. If you can resubmit, I would lower the song's volume and resubmit it.
I fixed the audio now :)
Ehh.
It was OK, I didn't find it that funny, but it was decent animation. But you should use a dictionary, it is spelled "pepper"
haha I know that was kinda a joke. it's not like i have really pore gramer
Nice
Very detalied, good voice sync, smooth animation
Even if you did spell pepper wrong, Good job
haha I MEANT TO SPELL IT WRONG! I was too lazy to think of something clever for a title so I just spelt it with an "a "