I like it!
I always love seeing people still trying to do serious animations with good stories...with most vids i check out, i have a hard time makin it to the end...but with this, the story kept me in till the finish, so im excited to see where this goes.
my one thing of advice was that, at the beginning peoples names went before the spoke. and then later that just dropped out...so just keep that consistent....
like the " brian: blah blah blah"...u know?
but thanks for keepin the respect for serious animation alive!