Not bad but.....
.... Not very good, improved animation would be nice. And it was kinda bland.
Author Comments
This is my first flash I've ever really done. The simplicity of the art is intentional so please don't dock me down because of that. Please enjoy, and leave comments so that my next work kicks this one's ass! Sorry for the lack of pre-loader. Eventually I will learn how to add them.
not bad
if you improve your drwings and smooth the animation a bit,the next Flash could be pretty good
Keep up
midnight-phantom responds:
Thank you. I appreciate that. It's not easy drawing on the screen. My college has one of those art monitors and they are very sensitive to work with. Still want one though. :)
yay
This is what I expect someone's first movie to look like. It's too bad I too often see people's 10th movies being worse than this. You look like you could end up a real flash animator soon. Make sure to try and experiment with everything you can and not just stick to one type so that you can become more experienced faster. Right now try to focus on learning rather than making a good movie, then when you know flash fully you can focus on making the movies good and get front page everytime!
Sure seems odd for me to say something nice like this on a movie that wasn't very good, but I think you could become a great flash artist.
midnight-phantom responds:
Thanks dude. That means alot. They already blammed one submission I did, and I did mention that these were for my class. I just wanted to see what people thought. However I need to save some moolah and buy the program and a tablet. There are better ideas than this.
I'm sorry
But it wasnt really good...
I mean you had good music, simple storyline, but you need to take more time drawing, it looks as if you just slapped it together really quickly man, good luck next time
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