This is the sequel to my first video Jason, baseball and space. I tried to take some suggestions and put sound and color into it. It's still simple stick figures but still is funny. Hope you like it :)
Not bad at all.
For what seems to be your second published work, this isn't all that bad. A little more time to spit-shine your work, and I'm sure you could come up with something grander.
Also, ignore water-knight down there. Everything, by everyone, remember?
ugh
Really the animation wasn't good, and the story line really sounds like it's coming from a kids book. sorry but this isn't for newgrounds
better?
If you added colour and cleaned up your text a little bit this would actually be Good.
I you ahd some black and white back ground, that could have had basic solid Colour and it would have looked tidier.
Keep at it