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I am Alone

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A short survival "story"
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Was okay

You could make more of an effort towards the end of the story.
The piano part was perfectly executed. Keep trying.

Awesome.

Well, the piano part was a bit misleading... It didn't seem like it was going to be like a war-type movie at the beginning. The man also looked... strange...

To end on a good note, I'd like to say your story and style fit the song pretty well. A very refreshing survival movie. Good animation, and overall, this deserves an 8/10, 4/5.

Nice work!

There's been a ton of survival...

.....movies on Ng's. You're take was more like a mood piece. It was refreshing,...good job man.

Needs some improvement.

I'll start out with the positives, the animation was pretty good. I thought the piano part was perfectly synchronized with the song. Plus you get some bonus points for introducing me to some decent music. You can definately improve after watching the likeness of this flash, it was alright.

You somewhat set a flase interpretation on the flash, mainly due to the piano scene being beautifully animated, but the rest of the flash did not advance the plot. Just a man with a gun isn't a good storyline, plus the deer part needs some explaining, I was lost at that part.

The ending could use some work too, I guess I'm trying to that just some effort would make this flash several times better. I can see you tried hard, but it needs something to draw the viewer back. Anyway, keep up the great work!

coool

it was good wouldve been better without the singing thought ;)

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Faves:
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Votes
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Score
3.17 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 22, 2009
2:48 PM EDT