Uhm
The animation its not the worst, but this one is sooo boring. Music, Sounds + Alotof Action it will make it fair.
Author Comments
This is my first flash movie I have ever done, so don't be too hard on me :P
Give me instead a little proposal on what to improve first.
Sound
some sound at least would have been nice
Not bad.
I would suggest adding music and sound effects to the animation. Also, some of the parts could have used a little more detail, like the inside of the castle. Not bad for a first movie.
A tad dull...
Appreciate it's your first effort and all, but those parts where I had to witness just running were incredibly long. Making the flash shorter, adding a few more events and giving characters some more dialogue than they got so it feel like more of a reward after witnessing a marathon would've made it better and compensated.
Not too bad...
But not good either.
It was your first animation, and it was not that bad.
It only needed two things: Sound and to make the graphics to be a little more big.
Thoses sprites were too smal, and this can destroy any sprite animation.
You only need to improve on these, and then you'll be a good animator in the future ^^
PS: I think that the initial introduction was too fast and that "blablabla" was unnecessary, but it was a good animation.