Hello all, this is my end of the year project for 8th grade project I really wanted to make a flash animation, so I did. This is my second full flash animation (first that's not total crap) and not 4 fps, it's a crisp 45. I tryed to get it to loop and not stop the songs loop, but it does and I hate it. Even though its very simple I hope you enjoy it. Any constructive criticism is welcome, and thank you.
Hey, McManuses.
I liked this, even though it wasn't particularly eventful. I saw your animation at school, and I knew that you must have sent it to Newgrounds, so I went to go and check it out. Anyways, good job, considering you're pretty much new to animation. I usually would have rated this a low score, but since you're my friends and I know how you animate, I'm gonna throw you a bone. Be seeing ya.
- Jared
^^^^^^
Nice little and funny animation. The ending is really good :).
Thanks for using my music! ;)
Dud
Thanks for making it
Neat.
The animation was nice, although the balloons and the harness aren't positioned properly. There should have been an incline somewhere on the harness to emphasize the wind's push.
All in all, I thought it was a good short.
Thanks for letting me know, I had not noticed.
jajaja
this was great you have a good potential i give you a 10
simple but really funny
thank you, and trust me that this was a learning process for a lot of things.
meh...
well, it wasn't terrible nor did it make me want to scrub my eyes out with acid. but it needs some work. while the balloons are bunched together they'd still have some independent movement, same for their strings, loosen them up a bit. the penguin was cute but do you really think he wouldn't be moving around? give him some life,having him sway a little would help too, which would also affect how the balloons move.
I understand what you are saying and I wanted to make them move but I had made a picture with that image and 4 clouds and used those to make the flash animation, on something that was not so rushed (due today) I would have made the balloons and strings move.
P.S: RuN-oN sEnTaNcE aLeRt
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