Excellent movie, but...
I wanted to hear that part D = XDDDD Awesome job! Keep it up! ^_^
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The parable of the Prodigal Son with a bunch of random things thrown in.
This was originally a video for my Theology class without the color. The color helped. A lot. And so did the actual movement of the mouths. That helped too.
Well... enjoy as best as you can.
supersysscvi responds:
Ah, well, thanks much!
It was good :D
I thought it was funny and good, THOUGH the singing was really getting on my nerves ._. I hope you make more like this! (though without the singing :P)
supersysscvi responds:
Heh, alright, I'll remember to hack out such songs in later animations.
LOL "welcome to goodburger"
the singing part was annooying, and animation was a bit crude. But it was funny
supersysscvi responds:
Hm, I'll keep working on it then. Thanks much.
I didn't like it.
I'm not sure if it was the brutal song, or the lack of humor, but the random edge thrown in really made for a nerve-grating watch.
These elements, combined with this headache I now have totally masked whatever concept you were trying to run with here.
I'd suggest minimizing the confusing elements as much as you can, to get your message across.
However, I give you points for correct volume usage, and effective animation. I'd advise working with a writer to better organize your thoughts and add detail to your future movies.
supersysscvi responds:
Hm, minimizing confusing elements to get my message across? Huh. There was no real point to this animation other than "make a long enough animation to get a good grade". And to that aspect, it was a success.
It doesn't make a good message, though. No, not a good message...
Hm, thanks for the advice. Thanks much for it, actually. Very constructive... and applicable.
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