Hey! This is my first flash ever, and i hope everyone enjoys it.
It's basically about three people (Arihiro Chizuka, with red hair; Xaioen Beijing, the albino; and Niidori Usova, the dual-colored hair girl) in New York City, when Arihiro decides to run off - so it's up to Xaioen and Niidori to find him! It's a silly flash that took me about two weeks to make (this was during school, so i had VERY limited resources and time.)
I made the characters by drawing them, scanning in the pictures, and using photoshop to color them, and flash to semi-animate them. Unfortunately, since it was at school and i lacked a drawing tablet (even though i have one now....), i couldn't add the amazing flow that people like Fioriparty, Snowdragon, and many other people could make, and since i don't have flash at home (yet), i can't edit this....darn.
anyway, i hope you enjoy! :D The song is 'Why should i worry', by Billy Joel, from the movie Oliver and Company.
More animation
More animation would be good... the coloring itself is good... maybe need some voices...
voices would be good
good thing that there was sound... cause that would of been a major point decreaser...........
but, it was good...
good characters... loved the outfits and stuff
so, i give you a
6/10
3/5
rock on~
i'll see what i can do for the next flash, once i get the software. If i had a computer mic when i was doing the flash, there would defenately have been some voice acting in there.
not a bad first solo.
Naturally I'm not able to vote much higher than 2 for this, but It was a good clean flash, and not bad for a first timer.
Thanks! :D
it was ok
I like that song and think it fit well with the animation, even if the quality of it was somewhat low. Still it was a good job, especially for you saying you had very limited resources.
Your first? Cool! ^^
Considering this was your first flash, it was actually pretty good. Your drawing is right on the money, and your voice to mouth synchronization is very accurate. I can't give you too good a review though, because there is still some work needed on the actual animation, and the story was a little empty (no point to what happened). Otherewise this flash could be the start to a rather successful animating carreer!
Hope to see your next flash soon! =)
Thank you lol, the mouth movement was something that i was rather proud of xD but nothing else turned out good to me. thanks for your review :)
It's okay...
It's okay.
would u mind telling me what you didn't like? i just wanna know what i can improve on. :D