Pretty O.K Not all that great but try not to blam im new to flash and newgrounds and I don't know how hard you peeps take this...
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im sorry but that wus horrible....like i didnt get the purpose of da flash and if it wuz meant 2 be random or funny it wuz just plain stuppid and the drawings were hideous im sorry but that wuz a pretty bad evn if yu r new 2 making flashes....it wuznt evn funny it wuz just very poor drawings and voices im sorry but that sucked dick
funny
lol good begin
Nope
Well, concerning the looks, it's actually a try compared what we see here everyday. But I couldn't understand a single thing, even if it was meant to be a randomness movie. Funny movies are harder to make than it looks like.
It looks like your goal was just having a movie in Newgrounds, rather than focusing on a subject. It's like an essay, no one reads it if the purpose is not clear.
But keep training on Flash, ask friends to watch it and make suggestions. People you don't know (the ones judging your movie here) are more likely to nuke you for this.
Yeah, I guess yoiu're pretty much right. Thanks Anyways!
You're right; it isn't that great.
I kind of liked that wee bit of fbf in the intro, but I think the characters were rather crudely drawn. Also, I noticed you coloured in some things with one of the default gradients, which makes things look cheesy, frankly. The plot was kind of funny though, in that sort of "random humour"-type way.
That was a nice positive review! Thanks!