Pretty interesting

Pretty good animation, interesting (if confusing) story, though. But you've got soe potential. Keep it up and you'll have no problem going places :D

you are good at drawing

i give you 5 because you have good drawing skill. if i should give you a tip it would be to reuse what you draw, and ass little as posible do the use of tweening. try get some animes and go frame by frame in some scenes and draw the stuff you see. this will give you a better understanding of how movement works.
also its always a good idea to put a tumbnail on so we can see what were watching.
i look forvard to see some more stuff from you :D

hmm

It was actually pretty nice.
I would like to see a movie from you in color, with music, more sound, voices,...
Keep up the good work ;)

Not bad

Not to bad for a first animation

impressive

very impressive first try. came out much better than i expected from reading the description. i was thinking "first flash oh god here comes terrible art or just some sticks and choppy animation either way." but the animation was pretty fluid and i really liked your art style im hopin to see more from you ill remember the name.