Whoa.
This is one of the better things I voted on today, I cant wait to see this as a finished product. Great job!
Author Comments
Thanks to everyone who commented on my first one!!! I've made a bunch of improvements! This will be the last version of this teaser. Over the next week or so I'll be trying to do one or two more. They will not be the same as this one, or the last two. I'm using these teasers to hone my flash skills. The next few will begin to actually explore character animations and such. This teaser was made to test the waters. Now that the waters have been tested, and enough people seem interested, I'm going to really get down to business. If you are one of the people who has sent me a message offering me some help, I thank you and will start speaking to you guys when I get the script finished.
This is a newer, less messed up version of my 3013 Teaser. It is for the project I'm working on. I'm hoping to have it all finished by the end of summer.
Also, if you are an animator and would be interested in joining the 3013 team, please contact me. I'm still working on the story, but at its core it will be a post-apocalyptic sci-fi set in the year 3013, one year after the apocalypse. It's also going to have a total running time of around 13-15 minutes.
Team members needed in all positions, please contact me if you are an animator, voice actor, or some person who could benefit this project. I really do need all the help I can get.
P.S.
I am a terrible animator!!!! Normally, I can be found exclusively in NG's audio portal, but today is a new day! I think this teaser shows why I need all the help I can get! I have a story that I think is pretty good. If anyone wants more information just contact me. The script I have written is still in my notebook. When I get it finished I will get it up so people can check it out. I put this up in he hopes that I might be able to find a few people who would be interested in the story. The teaser doesn't really get into it, but it's a crazy story. I actually have more of the ending written than anything else, but damn... It's one hell of an ending...
This teaser...
keep getting better! Great work!
Terrible animater my.....
Your artistic work and animation is smooth and impressive. I believe this is something to look out for!
You could be better at visual exposition.
Maybe there ought to be a special trailer portal where trailers can be submitted seperately from games and movies. Anyway, your trailer gets the job of publicity done, but it doesn't stand on its own as something interesting to watch. Conceptually it is very simple, without much visual exposition. All that you tell us is that an ICBM incineerates a city as a cloaked figure watches.
It would be more effective if you explored more angles and showed more dynamic movement. There is a fine line between creating suspense and simply compensating for lack of animation experience, and it looks like the latter. Take inspiration from Fallen Angel, a tried and true apocalypse story, even if you can't yet animate like that. An animator's job is to make things move. Even if you have the right music, the right text, you need to do your part of the project.
well dame
Well shoot that just looks cool altho the only real animation was like 1/3 of a second it looks good. defiantly a flash I'll be watching for.
