It's not cheese its coon!!!

Dude! you did good regardless of what people say. This is what my first flash will look like so just give it a few years and maybe one day i'll be calling the shots master!

Heck...

Hey man good job. For your first one its pretty kik ass. My first one was with a chicken lol. Ok well keep it up.

4 rating... 3 out of 5 rank. Ok?

p.s. make another

Ok, so the Overall doesn't add up...

I gave you a higher overall cause in general it was pretty good, and it was your first flash. Congrats on doing so well your first time around.

Very nice First

Normaly Id give this type of film around a 5 or 4 but since this is your first flash this is very impressive. I gave you a 9 overall for it being your first flash it takes real tallent to do wel l the first time nice work.

ummm much work needed

idunno... i have absolutely no comments...
just didn't like it... well except when the pear got cut in half...