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LaughStory Animation

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a little animation advertisement i promised to make for a friend's maplestory private server
site is http://65.75.241.65:8080/
forum is http://laughstory.smfforf ree.com/
rates are 200x 50x 2x
just a little animation i made for laughstory to advertise


...its my first actual animation so.. w/e S:


YEAH I KNOW IT SUCKS.

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Animation is meant for an entertainment that one can make laugh also.Animation is a medium to make the people so entertain.

uh what ?

that didn't made any sense

Needs serious improvement

The lack of any kind of sound, including voice overs, music, and sound effects is a major problem. On top of that, the text at the beginning is a color which makes it hard to read and isn't there long enough to be read properly.
The last problem I had with it was that the joke at the end wasn't funny, perhaps it is just the way it was delivered, but something more original would be appreciated.

One last note, and I am sure you will get this a lot, it was very short.

Not AWFUL...

The animation was good, but the video wasn't much by itself. If you could make a full video in that medium, that would be really cool.

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Views
3,049
Votes
4
Score
0.88 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 16, 2009
9:14 PM EDT