meh
lol it was ok and kinda funny
but why was one of them Asian?
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With permission from Zuggz (using U-Gamer, my alternate name which is now banned), I have updated this flash with:
Play/Pause Buttons (also freezes voices)
AD system shows credits
I will credit Zuggz as soon as possible.
And this does have updates. Please do not blam. This is my second ever finished animation (after my Bully Collab part).
I want something to finally be mine...A flash that I worked hard on and stays on Newgrounds.
BrainToast responds:
I was waiting for someone to ask that
Mac is not asian, it's just that I wanted it to look like Mac was having fun listening to music on his Apple computer so that's why during the dream Mac looks asian.
LOL
Although it was not the best, i thought the linux idea was pretty funny seeing as all my friends use it.
Not quite...
I respect that you tried, the buttons and the whole making fun of the mac commercials was comical. However, I have a hard time seeing how this idea belonged to you specifically. You said you want something to finally be yours... I don't think copying off other company's commercials qualifies as original, and truly yours.
Some advice,
Try getting more voice actors, a better recording microphone, and work on your animation because that was just terrifying.
my ears are bleeding
i respect that you put some effort into making a flash for others to enjoy. but we enjoy quality as well. this needs a lot of improvements. If you are afraid this will get blamed then that just means you released it knowing it wasn't fully ready for the public, which means you still need to put more effort into it. nice try, it seemed like a good idea. improve the audio and thr flash its self and resubmit. good luck on your next one.
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