What a neat little birthday present
The movie itself is pretty silly and you did some pretty good looking stick figures.
I would say about average here but when you compare your sticks to the usual faceless stick figures that shoot guns at each other than that raises it to above average.
People in general don't like stick movies because of a large number of them are generic but there are also stick movies that have personality and show strong signs of creativity such as your movie for example.
The sticks in your movie do look a little generic since you drew the goofy sticks in the same manner as you seen in a lot of other movies.
There is nothing to stop you from putting more definition in there eyes because anything looks better than just dots for the eyes.
But it's the movies sense of humor that worked for me even while the brush strokes were sloppy, the sticks looked a bit generic but not grossly generic so that is a step up anyways.
I found your nonstick drawings to be more distinct and interesting to look at.
If you are to stick with doing stick movies than just keep working on giving your stick more of a style that is all your own.
You'll reach a point that when people see your stick movies they will know right away that it was something you made.
Your really good and i look forward to seeing you either dropping the sticks or make your sticks in a brand new style.
In closing the person you made this for must be having a happier birthday because of your stupid little movie.