Man this is not funny anymore!! Bah!!"
Sorry but this is not funny!. and it's pretty repetitive!!. XD I Didn't Have Fun!.
Author Comments
I made this as a part of a competion with my friend and I was on a time limit, and the fag wouldn't tell me how to use spell check, or even that there was a spell check until after i made it, but i still wanted you guys to see the rough copy.
Good job; needs some work though
Good flash, it's alot better than I can do. Some parts of the dialogue were unreadable because I only had 1 second to read a paragraph. Keep up the good work though!
I'm sure that if you've read the previous reviews, you'd know you need to work on your English. If you need to check your spelling, type the words in Microsoft Word and see if they are spelled right.
Tolled = Told
oppent = opponent
So, first things first
Try to study some english before uploading something, what's "tolled"?
Animation was cool and the concept to, even if I don't like naruto.
Keep the animation a try to use familiar sounds to the series instead of dragonball sounds.
eh, it was okay.
It was okay, but it could be a lot better. For one, sound was annoying, because of the little teleport noise and background music being used at the same time. Also it looked like not much effort was put into this because it looked like some parts were rushed.
Not bad but....
Ok, over all concept of the fight was not to bad. But following the clone through the fight was nearly impossible for me. Making them distinguished with different colors would help a lot.
The main annoyance is that the buttons to click to continue the sequence are in different places its best to try to have them in the same spot through out the movie.
Commentary was basic, and dry IMO. But execution of the over all combat was not to shabby.