I'm sorry It was way less choppy when I made it, dang camstudio. My first animation. Took me a while because of my lack of skill back then (still not that good now). I'm proud of it. This was originally a promo for a band entitled "False Union".
Should have kept
Sorry man but this should have been kept on your computor not placed on newgrounds. I see it's been said by just to sum it up, the movement was to choppy, the sounds need some twicking, and what you used was extremly simple. I understand this is your first but that simply means you keep it to yourself and maybe a few freinds. you summit one that you feel you've worked all the bugs out of.
Sloppy.
A little too simple and way to sloppy. Movement was choppy, no plot, and it was too short. Keep working.
Once again, camstudio f'd it up.
I didn't enjoy that.
That wasn't very pleasurable. A lot of graphical decay was present, and the sound effects were sub-par. I can imagine this being a test of the controls at the bottom, more than an actual animation.
Sorry, camstudio has f'd it up.
Great for first!
Not one of the best flash movies out there, but good for a starter!
Thanks for the review.