good but..
you seriously need to find more sprites and sound effects
btw who was the cyber elf?x was dead in mmz3. was it axl?
Author Comments
This is the first flash video I have ever contributed to newgrounds.
IOW: please don't go too hard on me.
If you didn't like it, then please only give CONSTRUCTIVE critisism (unless it was absolutely terrible).
Either way I hope you enjoy Megaman Zero the movie part one!
EDIT:
I am very happy to see that so many people support this.
I didn't expect people to give me this much support and just want to say thanks for that.
Pretty Good
hey
I think that your flash was quitre good for a first flash, the intro was a bit long though. This looks like it has a good storyline and it is set out well. Cant wait to see the next one.
you know who i am lol
vakamaMX responds:
Haha...
I do know u
Not bad. Some room for improvement
Remove the dbz style from the fights. No offense, but it doesn't look good in MMZ. I love the idea, and can't wait to see where this goes. You do need sound effects. I have some MMX style sounds if you need them. Now, who is the cyber elf. It sounds like X, but the original X is gone by the end of MMZ3. But, I won't say anything about that, it is your story after all. I did notice, you need to work on the action. I didn't like the energy beam that looked like it was coming out of Zero's dick. There are custom MMZ sprites on Sprites Inc you could use for the special poses. I didn't like that Zero had a tendency to disappear in the fight, but that falls in the no dbz area of this review. I have special effects if you need those (because, no offense, those looked terrible except for a few). Anyway, summing it up. No DBZ style, please! and, sound effects and better special effects. All in all, very nice first flash. Somewhat better than my first flash (made for Neo Fusion's MK collab)
Hrm...
As far as first Newgrounds flashes go, this was much better done than most. I spotted a few spelling and grammatical errors which you might want to look into if you continue to keep this a word rather than voice based story. Dialog was rather one sided into a character of zero renoun. Sound effects are a must. Visual effects were ok and will improve as the story evolves. And last, it was short...like, really short. Usually origin parts are longer while including much more dialog.
It was ok. But you'll do better as time progresses and as you make more flashes. I like the sprite stylings and if you get better, someday you may equal the caliber of such things as Super Mario Bros. Z, but that's for the future to decide. All things considered, it could be much better and it could be much worse. So, for now, you get a well earned 3/5 5/10.
Eh...
It was decent.
You could use some voice actors.
And as one of the others said you should add sound effects.