Great Story Always Exceeds Style
It is quite an interesting story behind your animation. As you refine your style, it will become easier for others to understand your stories. I would recommend making a few short stories just for yourself, and maybe not for newgrounds, and try animating them in a few new styles, each one more challenging than the last. And avoid putting your newest or best stuff on Newgrounds; use NG as a platform for development of storytelling in respect of a possibly very large audience.
Looking forward to more great stories.