Nice but not much of a movie
The artwork is great, but that's really all there is, this isn't really a movie. Have you seen the Art Portal? You should try submitting there instead, it would probably get better response that way. I saw your first flash many years ago and thought it was fantastic for your first try. Have you been using flash from time to time since then? If that's the case you should really try to make a real animated movie cause you've got the talent for it.
Anyway, for the art alone it would deserve a 9/10, but since there's nothing more than that I'm only giving you 5/10. Good luck in the future though!