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i did this when i was bored one day its ma first one like this so its a bit dodgey but still enjoy ,guys thanx for the great comments i will work on that and take your comments serriosly
Music was good
Some problems, no preloader, no replay button, music runs on after the real thing is done, needs voices, last scene's joke is overused. Good music and animation will give you a 8/10 here!
...in the what?!
the suspense was killing me!
but then i watched it and realized it doesn't matter.
The animation is good, and your style's kinda cool, but you have to work on the script. Think of a story or a plot the next time.
This is pretty good for your first flash. Most people fail at drawing plain stick figures in their flashes. Funny flash, too short though.
It's just a loop...
Not horribly drawn, but somewhat crappy nonetheless. The short loop it is kind of gets to me though, and what I really don't like is how you don't credit ParagonX9 for the Chaoz Japan song you used. Always give credit dude. Not cool to not give credit.
Four dwarven leaders in search for ancient treasure.
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