I thoguht it was interesting, the drawings were fairly good and the story was good enough. The tweening was pretty good too.
That animation could have been a little better but...good job?
Not that bad.
Its okay but resubmit it with the preloader though.
i think you might be able to work on this concept. beter animantion, more dialoge, more people to make a fight and you got your self a good flash. i incourege you to keep trying.
It seems as if a lot of time was put into this, but the artist did not have a vast amount of skill. animation was decent, but unrefined. Overall, good