You have potential!

Really, youre great! Nice, realistic, awesome animation you made.

Excellent first submission

Well-drawn, well-animated. Throw in some color, sound, and cleanup, and your skills can really go places. Also, see what kind of plotlines you can come up with; do a storyboard or something. This gets a 4 and 7 from me, and I look forward to seeing how you perform.

good work

I see you will be good at making movies you are off to a good start

Great

Nice drawings and frame by frame animation. The smoke and the gold thing effects were awesome.

Not bad!

Ran smoothly it looped very well and was pretty original, would have been better if it had had sound and if it were a-little longer. It was weird in a kinda cool way, you should make MOAR!