A quck flash i had to do for class, i wanted my friends to see it & i guess others... i'll be putting a better longer one on here later...
SO CLOSE...!
YOU ARE SO CLOSE DUDE!!!!
The graphics are beast.
Ideas brilliant.
Suspense and scenes were perfect.
The animation was the only thing holding you back!
All you need to do is spend more time on the animation and you will be a BEAST!
-Mr. Figgy Mcfigginstein
(P.S. If you can PM me i would like some help on some graphic designs that i think you can help me with ^^)
it definately needs work but theres potential
the thing that got me off the most was the audio but i thought that while the concept of a man dying for his snack has been used many times it still makes me chuckle and i encourage you to keep working on it
props for doin an animation
Lol FaiL rofl
Haha, I saw the other version, You had a pretty good flow to it, sadly I see you took out the other half along with the drawings for it.
No.
I am dissipointed with the fact that the story as much shorter, and the joke was a lot less funny. -1 point.
Tis aight'.
I seen some effort put into this so it isn't that bad, maybe make it a bit longer and turn down the outro and intro music some, it's really crackly on my speakers when played, and really loud too D:. Otherwise good job so far, keep it up.