10/10 best new animation Dan does it again xxx

what the...

That was really weird, but pretty entertaining. ^_^

Awkward... But Funny

Your artwork and animation were pretty good, it's hard to label them actually. The sound great, however the voice work seemed a bit quiet. The storyline is random and funny and I would love to see more from this John character in the near future. All in all a decent flash.

|| Good Points ||
*Great Artwork
*Good Animation
*Great Sound
*Good Voice
*Great Story
*Funny

|| Bad Points ||
*Voices A Bit Quiet

Could have been better

I think it had a lot of potential but sadly there was no life in the voices which ruined it for me. The animation though I liked.

It's okay...

It is a lot better than the other crap that gets posted on newgrounds. Come to think of it, it's better than a lot of the crap they show on tv.

Try to make it a bit more interesting. Make the characters deliver the lines in different ways to find which is best for the comedic effect of the overall movie.

3/5
6/10

Good luck with the flash thing your doing...