Clever
I giggled at the end. Not hilarious but i giggled
Author Comments
I made this right after my sister had showed me some strange cartoon she made in school. Actually the brother is me and the sister is her, and Kirby is a caracter I just wanted to draw. :3
This is my first flash I've ever uploaded so please, don't be so critical... Yet, the caracters are simply stickmen (apart from Kirby).
When it came to music I took the first thing I found, which was from "The Sims".
About the japanese text: I thought it was funny and sure it's somewhat misspelled but I just copied it from some eng-jap glossary. I believe the last word mean "suicide"...
eum...
Enjoy!
funny
just one thing to add might be a play button that way it doesn't start out of the blue, other wise it was pretty good for a first movie, oh another thing you don't really have to add it but a replay button its just a thought.
lol
it was minimalistic but it made me lol :]
use what you got
I wont be critical but i must point out the obvious.
Ok.. No animation thats kool, its no big deal BUT!
If you want to have a slide show type deal make up the lack of animation with time taken artistic drawings.
Other than that, the idea behind it was funny and the random kirby was a bit weird.
-Mr. Figgy Mcfigginstein
What the...
Erm this is a toon?
Me writing in a scrapbook for 5 minutes can do better.