Good!
the music was good!
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This is only an experiment, and it is un-finished, I was just testing out some things, don't vote harshly.
(give it a while to get off that white screen)
<3 Nani
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No!
Don't experiment in teh portal.
That's supposed to be in the alpha section.
No content
Newgrounds is for finished work, not tests. There has to be some content to the work or there's no point in anyone watching it.
I'd defiantly suggest fixing the white screen problem for future too. You should try to make there be no obstacles to the viewers watching your film, otherwise they may stop watching before your film has even started.
The test it's self looked ok. Just try putting the idea in a proper movie?
Sweet
looks great if you ask me i like the music, maybe add to it some more make it longer or into whatever your planning too after the experiment
tops
Good!
Thats pretty damn good so far. Keep up with that.