why the sudden ending?

i liked your other animations but this one doesnt seem to make a whole lot of sense, ill check your page periodically for new stuff. keep up the good work but try to add a interesting story once in a while, these are just suggestions im no expert.

Meh

Keep trying, refine your animations and actually add a plotline and I think you can become quite an artist! But for now... Keep trying, this one won't catch on.