Can be much better
The animation went by too fast and the text also went by too fast. The story was actually good but you could've done more with it.
This is a flash I did for school. Hope you like it.
FRAMES: 296
LAYERS: 1
SYMBOLS: 4-6 INCLUDING SOUND FILE
PRODUCTION TIME: FOUR TO FIVE HOURS
I did this flash to practice my animation skills.
Can be much better
The animation went by too fast and the text also went by too fast. The story was actually good but you could've done more with it.
I agree...too fast
Yeah, this went by way too fast. I also think it needs more of a story to it. It wasn't very original; we've all seen the idea of fishing and catching a boot instead.
too fast
hard to read, but animation is not bad, try to add some frames.