Can be much better
The animation went by too fast and the text also went by too fast. The story was actually good but you could've done more with it.
I agree...too fast
Yeah, this went by way too fast. I also think it needs more of a story to it. It wasn't very original; we've all seen the idea of fishing and catching a boot instead.
hard to read, but animation is not bad, try to add some frames.