You did well. Honestly. People might tell you that you can't draw/animate, etc. but don't let them get to you. Remember that usually, they don't even know how to animate or draw any better than you can (That's the way I am :D)
My main problem with it was that it was a little slow-paced. Speed things up when it comes to action and fighting.
Other than that, nice job, and keep animating, you'll get better and better.
You are very right with what you just said. I know it will take time to get good with animation, but everyone starts out as a newbie somewhere in life. However, it's whether you take the time and effort to go all out and do your best do you ever get out of that stage in life. I hope to accomplish just that.
the story is good but the drawings are bad
Wasn't that bad
I expected the end actually :). Work on your drawings. The animation was fair.
It was okay for a first flash, but it wasn't all that great. Keep trying, kid.