We need more of these!!
A true work of art to say the least!
This tale is beautifully constructed and the narration keeps your attention.
I can say i thoroughly enjoyed this short novel.
Something of a delicat masterpiece one can say.
GREAT work! <3
4 a second their i thought the story would go Mario style epically with kong and a flaming fruit stinky u could say .... i enjoyed it but man o man after all what i can say is what a non-logical and superficial world we live in .
Damn! The end was quite a slap in the face. I loved it. You should write more of these short stories (if you have then I wouldn't know).