Inventive indeed
Excellent. Though it should be:
"Here is the 'cheque'."
Inventive indeed
Excellent. Though it should be:
"Here is the 'cheque'."
this is amazing
i love the animations concept and the art and the man speaking in an eloquent sophisticated and disillusioned way and its great how you put in youtube and loling and
still sounded intelligent i mean the character really spoke to me and if he had a name i wouldn't forget it hands down one of my favorite animations here
Tell me you're an author~
This is absolutely amazing... I'm striving to become an author myself, but this is just poetry that sounds so casual to the narrator, but poetry to the reader's ear and eye. Even the artwork. Completely classic! As oddly put as it is, it all fits perfectly to the story's plot. No matter how random it may be, the words and descriptions just make it seem so alive, even with no sounds or people speaking at all. Now THAT just made it even better. Picture-still animation and interactive reading, with classic artwork and a story that's defined as finery and art itself.
I LOVE IT!
Originality!
2 years and you're still getting great reviews. And here's another:
I really enjoyed this. Very creative, very original in terms of delivery. Some of the audio (not counting the narration) sounded a bit flat. But all in all I really liked this. I look forward to seeing more from this crew!
Loved it
Thought the art was lovely, and the voice acting was so...well done! The narrator's voice was very attractive. :)
I think there were a few grammatical errors in your story, but it wasn't too noticeable. It sounded more like poetry.
Good work!